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Gary Sharpe's avatar

Very good. We need to become the hero our own story.

Havakuk's avatar

Lovely to hear from you, Gary — you are an overcomer!

THE LETHAL TEXT's avatar

Great stuff. Reminds me of Taoist poetry in its simplicity. Some lines ring like bells.

Havakuk's avatar

I like the imagery of ringing like bells! I still experience it when I read it back.

I used the Substack 'playback' option to listen to it read to me. I was astonished to disgust that the ai changed tiny elements of the phrases I'd used., inserting link write, exchanging a "yet" for a "but" and more. Strange and Unexpected!